I think your photographs stand to work well as a series, perhaps with the whole cake shown first. Technically, I think the second print is done better - the top image is too blurry for my eye to land anywhere in particular. With that in mind, what is the concept behind the images?
I really want to know the concept, like jarrod. I also agree about the blurryness...and there is a lot of lint, but I'm sure you'll be able to fix that. The angle for the picture above is done really well, I especially enjoy how the chair frames it and leads your eye to the picture, which leads you to the cake.
Yeah I am having trouble finding the concept. Like Jarrod I think the second print has stronger technical quality. The first is too blurry and lacks a strong subject focus. It is most sharp at the top of the image where there is little information.
yea ryan im also curious about the concept?? the picture of the man im also curious about it seems like a graduation photo? maybe a celebration and thats the meaning of the cake?? or maybe your really upset that you just ate all those calories?!!!!
Oh yeah we were supose to place a concept i forgot.
Basically it is a birthday scene and it is supose to be ambiguious thats all i have. lol.
There are like four different meanings depending on which series i want to go with bc i have some with the cake "Eaten" some not some with picture some not. Some with people and some not etc etc etc, basically i am hurrily making many prints and seeing how they work together.
Okay this is what I have been able to do so far what do you all think about it?
ReplyDeleteI think your photographs stand to work well as a series, perhaps with the whole cake shown first. Technically, I think the second print is done better - the top image is too blurry for my eye to land anywhere in particular. With that in mind, what is the concept behind the images?
ReplyDeleteI really want to know the concept, like jarrod. I also agree about the blurryness...and there is a lot of lint, but I'm sure you'll be able to fix that. The angle for the picture above is done really well, I especially enjoy how the chair frames it and leads your eye to the picture, which leads you to the cake.
ReplyDeleteNice idea. I agree with previous folks. A tripod would better it.
ReplyDeleteYeah I am having trouble finding the concept. Like Jarrod I think the second print has stronger technical quality. The first is too blurry and lacks a strong subject focus. It is most sharp at the top of the image where there is little information.
ReplyDeleteyea ryan im also curious about the concept?? the picture of the man im also curious about it seems like a graduation photo? maybe a celebration and thats the meaning of the cake?? or maybe your really upset that you just ate all those calories?!!!!
ReplyDeleteOh yeah we were supose to place a concept i forgot.
ReplyDeleteBasically it is a birthday scene and it is supose to be ambiguious thats all i have. lol.
There are like four different meanings depending on which series i want to go with bc i have some with the cake "Eaten" some not some with picture some not. Some with people and some not etc etc etc, basically i am hurrily making many prints and seeing how they work together.